Green Dream
Jan. 20th, 2008 11:14 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
talkstowolvesI just finished "Green Dream."
And, by "finished," I mean "finished an incredibly rough draft."
I am actually feeling pretty badly about it right now. I feel like I've fallen vastly short of what I was trying to say and I still have so much work to do on it. I need to edit out a lot of dead weight, find new words to make several descriptions much more illuminating and cutting, and try to bring it more into alignment with what I was trying to invoke.
I'm sure the alcohol is exacerbating my feelings in this regard.
Anyway. I wrote 2327 words on it tonight.
The current rough draft is about 13 pages in manuscript, or 8027 words.
I hope to have it out to beta readers by Tuesday night or Wednesday at the latest. If you are not a beta reader and would like to be, comment below. I'll consider you for inclusion.
And, by "finished," I mean "finished an incredibly rough draft."
I am actually feeling pretty badly about it right now. I feel like I've fallen vastly short of what I was trying to say and I still have so much work to do on it. I need to edit out a lot of dead weight, find new words to make several descriptions much more illuminating and cutting, and try to bring it more into alignment with what I was trying to invoke.
I'm sure the alcohol is exacerbating my feelings in this regard.
Anyway. I wrote 2327 words on it tonight.
The current rough draft is about 13 pages in manuscript, or 8027 words.
I hope to have it out to beta readers by Tuesday night or Wednesday at the latest. If you are not a beta reader and would like to be, comment below. I'll consider you for inclusion.